Malam Senin atau Minggu malam ini gue melakukan sedikit kemajuan untuk mulai menulis lagi. Walau masih dalam level couch potato, gue sudah mulai mencoret-coret di jurnal serbaguna kesayangan beberapa nama tokoh di cerita yang sedang gue rancang dan sebuah denah sekolah yang akan menjadi lokasi utamanya. Mungkin bagi kebanyakan orang itu sama sekali bukan sebuah kemajuan, tapi bagi gue yang selama berbulan-bulan terakhir ini nggak menyentuh jurnal apalagi buka-buka folder novel on-going, bisa dibilang itu sebuah kemajuan.
Ketika gue selesai mencari-cari ide nama di situs kumpulan nama-nama bayi, pikiran gue tertuju ke lemari kecil yang hampir nggak pernah gue buka. Lemari kecil berwarna coklat muda dengan tiga pintu berjejer. Satu ukuran pintu hanya sebesar kuburan abu yang biasa gue lihat di drama-drama Korea. Di dalam kotak lemari itu berisi barang-barang yang seharusnya tidak perlu tapi entah kenapa nggak bisa gue buang. Ada dua dompet yang lagi nggak gue pakai, kotak sepatu bekas yang isinya penuh rongsoakn, buku biodata teman-teman di Jerman, print-out fanfic hasil kerjaan si Papa, buku diary waktu SD, dan sebuah binder yang gue pakai waktu SMA.
Gue ambil bindernya dan begitu gue buka, isinya seperti tumpahan kertas dicampur barang-barang yang tidak terduga. Ada kipas bergambar DBSK yang sudah patah, foto Super Junior masih bertiga belas, bahkan pasport lama gue. Yang paling membuat gue tertarik adalah saat gue menemukan beberapa lembar kertas yang dilipat dengan permukaan kertas yang sudah kotor seperti terinjak sepatu. Karena gue sama sekali nggak tahu apa isinya, gue bukalah lipatannya dan terpampanglah cover ini.
Ternyata bundelan kertas ini adalah skenario drama pelajaran Bahasa Inggris waktu kelas X SMA. Waktu itu kami di kelas dibagi dalam beberapa kelompok dan setiap kelompok harus menampilkan sebuah drama dengan tema apapun. Walhasil gue dan tujuh orang lainnya memutuskan untuk membuat skenario bertema detective. Jalan ceritanya kita buat sendiri lalu kita terjemahkan ke bahasa Inggris karena kita bikin mentahnya dulu pakai bahasa Indonesia. Kelas X menerjemahkan skenario sederhana ke bahasa Inggris, kalau zaman sekarang pasti cetek sekali ya, anak-anaknya sudah jago apalagi dibantu Google Translate yang jauh lebih canggih dibanding delapan tahun lalu.
Tapi maafkan saya Lord, begitu gue buka halaman pertama rasanya gue mau ngebakar skenario ini. Tunggu, sebenarnya kening gue udah berkerut-kerut waktu lihat cover judulnya dan membaca nama-nama tokohnya. Yang gue pikirkan saat itu hanya; "Ini nama-nama macam apa?". Berlanjut gue baca sekilas beberapa dialognya, gue semakin gemas dengan kemampuan bahasa kami (terutama gue) pada waktu itu. Jelas gue akui bahwa kemampuan bahasa Inggris gue yang dulu sangat sangat sangat payah dibandingkan sekarang. Untuk level bahasa Inggris gue sekarang aja bisa disebut payah, apalagi bahasa Inggris di skenario ini: FAIL! DISASTER! Benar-benar sebuah kekacauan, bacanya aja gue merinding. Pantaslah skenario ini seharusnya musnah ditelan bumi. Anyway, lucunya kami berdelapan waktu itu juga sama-sama nggak menyadari betapa hancurnya isi percapakan-percakapan itu. Yah... maklumlah kami waktu itu masih hanya anak sekolah yang sedang belajar bahasa Inggris. In case ada teman sekelompok drama gue yang baca ini, gue sekalian mau membagikan skenario kami yang menjijikan itu dan kalau dia tidak menemukan keganjilan di situ, sudah pasti kemampuan bahasanya tidak berkembang sejak kami latihan dramanya.
THE RIPPER'S CASE
:: The Cast ::
Ira Marliani as Jessie Francis
Endah Laraswati as Jasmine Kutcher
Dewi Rohmani as Ellen Jingle
Dimas Nugroho K. as Fred Jocelyn
Satriyo Adimulyo as Dylan Meyer
Wiedha F. Permana as Freida Ebenezer
Sa'adah Daroyni A. as Mary Phyllis
Yeni Nuraeni as Irene Leupold
SCENE 1
Location: Ellen Jingle's room
Jasmine: Hey Jess! What's wrong with you and Fred? Yesterday I saw him with another girl. Do you still dating?
Jessie: WHO??!! Who's Fred? I don't know him. (a little bit mad)
Jasmine: Please don't be pretend. I think he's on crush of you.
Jessie: Who said... (getting resist)
Ellen: STOP! Can you being peaceful just for one time? NO! Never ever ever!
Jessie: Sorry. She mock me first.
Jasmine: I'm sorry Ellen. (laugh). But it's so funny when I think about Jessie and Fred.
Jasmine go out.
Jessie: Where you go?
Jasmine: Bathroom. Wanna join? (laugh)
Jessie: No, thanks. Hey Ellen. Have you anything for me to drink? I'm so thirsty.
Ellen: (laugh) There's nothing proper to eat or drink here.
Jessie: Oh gosh. So poor. There's something in my throat.
Ellen: Oke, oke. I'll be right back. Is this okay if you're alone here?
Jessie: No problem. Don't forget, please the cold one.
Ellen: Yeah, little minnie cuttie.
Ellen go out to buy drinks. Suddenly, there's something make Jessie shocked.. Fred come in from the window.
Jessie: (scream) WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE??!! GET OUT NOW!!!
Fred: Please. I just want to speak with you. Just us.
Jessie: I won't. Get out now or I'll call security. (push Fred out the door and throw down)
Jasmine: (from bathroom) Jessie? What's wrong with you?
Jessie: (don't talk)
Jasmine: Jess? Oh gosh, my stomach... (back to the bathroom)
SCENE 2
Location: Apartement's pantry
Ellen: Dylan, can you take this water to my room? Room 107.
Dylan: Alright, Ma'am.
Dylan take the water to room 107.
Dylan: (open the door) Astagfirullah...
Dylan check the throb of artery of Jessie. Jessie has die. He move fast to the receptionist.
Dylan: There's... there's...
Mary: What happen? Calm down.
Dylan: There's anyone who killed.
Mary: Inna lillahi wa inna ilaihi raji'un. Oke, I'll call the police. Please calm down.
Mary call the 911.
Irene: Irene Leupold here from Beverly Hills Police.
Mary: Excuse me, Ma'am. There's anyone killed here in Zinnia Apartement room 107.
Irene: Thank you for your report. I'll be there soon.
SCENE 3
Location: Ellen Jingle's room
Not long, Irene Leupold, the police come.
Irene: The corpse still warm. The victim named Jessie Francis, 21 years old. There's a wallet here. The owner is Fred Jocelyn. Can you two follow me. I want to ask something.
Dylan: Hold on Ma'am! There's so many blood near the victim and a dagger.
Irene: Yes, I can see that. The blood was here and here. But there's something with this blood. The forensic crew will inspection there's finger print or not in this dagger.
Irene introgace Dylan and Mary.
Irene: What's your name, Miss? (ask to Mary). And you? (to Dylan).
Mary: Mary Phyllis. I'm a receptionist here.
Dylan: I'm Dylan Meyer, the office boy. I don't know anything about this case. I just found the corpse.
Irene: How's it done?
Dylan: About 11.16, I was ordered by Miss Ellen to bring drinks to her room. But before that, I bring a guest to room 105. At that I saw Miss Jessie was fight with Mr. Fred. And then he just saw his door.
Irene: What he did?
Dylan: I don't really know. As I remember, he just looked the door. Nothing else to do.
Irene: And what time you found the corpse?
Dylan: After I bring the guest, I came back to lobby and bring the drinks for this room as Miss Ellen's ordered. I saw Mr. Fred wasn't there anymore. And when I open the door, I saw her. (pointed Jessie). It was about 11.40.
Irene: Alright. Thank you Mr. Meyer. Can you call Fred Jocelyn to the location?
Dylan: Yes, Ma'am.
Irene: And Miss Mary. Can you give me your witness?
Mary: At 11.15 I was in lobby, as usual. I saw that Miss Ellen ordered drinks to Dylan to bring in her room. And she goes to restaurant, for lunch probably.
Irene: Where's the restaurant?
Mary: From the enter door, there's in the right.
Irene: Then?
Mary: Then about 11.40, Dylan came looks so shocked. He said that he saw someone has killed in room 107. So I called the police.
Irene: Thank you Miss Mary. Can you... (Suddenly, Ellen Jingle come.)
Ellen: What's happen? (seeing Jessie's corpse). HAH?! JESSIE!!! Why she...?! Who?!
Irene: Calm down, Miss. Now tell me who're you and what's your problem with Jessiw.
Ellen: I'm Ellen Jingle. I'm the victim friend. She lived with me here. I'm the owner of this room.
Suddenly, Jasmine come from bathroom, looks confused.
Jasmine: Hey, what's wrong?
Ellen: Jas! Jessie! (Cry, hug Jasmine).
Jasmine: What? What happen with Jessie? Ellen? (Confused. Then she seeing Jessie's corpse. Shock.)
Irene: Your name Miss?
Jasmine: Jasmine Kutcher, friend of Jessie.
Irene: And your witness, Ma'am?
Jasmine: I was in bathroom because I had a stomach ache. But when I was out for just a minute, Jessie still there. She looks shocked.
Irene: Alright, I'll call someone to come to this location. (call someone). Detective Freida Ebenezer will come here.
Then, Dylan Meyer come with Fred Jocelyn.
After that, Detective Freida Ebenezer come and meet Irene.
Freida: Thank you Irene to call me.
Irene: Yes, Freida. I hope you can help me to break this case.
Freida: Oke, I'll help you as I can. Can you show me what happen here?
Irene: Yes, there's the suspected. This's Jasmine Kutcher, she's a friend of victim (pointed Jasmine). And this is Ellen Jingle, a friend too. And the last is Fred Jocelyn. I don't really know what's the problem with him and victim. But...
Jasmine: I can explain. Fred loves Jessie very much. But Jessie never cared about him.
Irene: It would be fix that Fred was annoyed and killed Jessie.
Jasmine: I thought like that. But...
Freida: It's not fix before there's a clear evidence.
Jasmine: I found a wallet here near the victim. And this is Fred Jocely's owner, there's his driving license.
Freida: How...?
Fred: I don't know anything, Ma'am. I come here just now.
Jasmine: You don't know anything?! You killed her, right?! SPEAK FRED!!
Fred: What reason when I killed her?
Jasmine: You was annoyed and killed her!
Fred: No, it couldn't be??
Jasmine: I could be. Look, you leave your wallet here!
Dylan: Ma'am. (talk to Irene) How about the dagger?
Irene: My God. I almost forget it.
Freida: What dagger?
Irene: The dagger found near the victim. In this it found Jasmine's finger print.
Jasmine: (perplexed).
Freida: Do you ever touch this dagger? What last time do you use it?
Jasmine: (confused). As I remembered, two days ago I use it for peeled the onions.
Freida: Do you ever use it in two days ago? (ask to Ellen).
Ellen: No, I never use it. Jasmine bought it two days ago. I didn't use it even touch it.
Jasmine: What's wrong with your arm?
Ellen: Oh this? Strawberry juice poured to my blouse.
Freida: What are you doing when it's done?
Ellen: I ordered drinks to Dylan. I saw Fred in receptionist, talk about something with Mary. Whatever, I don't know. After that I saw him went to my room. Maybe for meet Jessie.
Freida: What are you doing when the victim still alive?
Fred: I got a message to meet Jessie in this room today. The message said that Jessie would talk about something with me. The door was clocked, so I came from the window. When she seeing me, she was so angry and evicted me.
Mary: Hey, what's it?
Freida: Can I see that?
Mary: Sure.
Irene: Fred, we will catch you because you're the last person who meet the victim and the evidences pointed that you're the murdered.
Fred: No, I won't. I'm not the murdered.
Freida: Wait, he's not the murderer. But she is! (pointed to Ellen)
Irene: Freida, why do you said that Ellen is the murdered? Can you explain how's you hyphotesis?
Freida: There's the time when Ellen ordered drinks, then she ordered Dylan to bring it to her room. But before he bring a guest to room 105. So..........................
FLASH BACK
Jessie: GET OUT HERE!!!!
Fred: You message me to come here, right?
Jessie: HERE?? WHEN I MESSAGE YOU??!? NO!... GET OUT NOW (push Fred)
Fred is gone.
Jessie: I SAID LEAVE ME ALONE. I WON'T MEET YOU AGAIN. (open the door)
Ellen: (stab Jessie's stomach with dagger)
Jessie: WHAT....AAA....YOU....DOOOOO (the left hand hold the dagger, the right one hold Ellen's arm)
Ellen: (close the door and mop the blood)
Jessie: (back to near window. She found Fred's wallet and write "J" in there. She took Ellen's sister photo and touch it with blood. And then died)
SCENE 4
Freida: So, that's my hyphotesis.
Irene: But, there's no evidence. You can't catch anybody without clear evidence.
Freida: Of course there's evidence. And there's in her arm. There! (pointed to Ellen's arm).
Irene: What do you mean, Freida?
Freida: Miss Ellen, can you fix your arm/
Ellen: (just look down).
Freida: Mary, can you fix her arm?
Mary fix Ellen's arm. And there's many blood in her blouse, and something down. Mary took that.
Mary: What's this?
Freida: This is the poison why Miss Jasmine had a stomach ache. She give this poison to Jasmine's water. The same poison in this glass.
Jasmine: For what?
Freida: For take you to another place when she killed Jessie. And there's blood in her blouse. Jessie hold her hand to Ellen's arm. Ellen doesn't have time to change her clothe. So...
Ellen: I'm not the murdered!! This is not a clear evidence.
Freida: There's two evidence again. In the wallet and your sister's photo. Jessie wrote "J", it's your initial last name, right?
Dylan: But Mr. Fred and Miss Jasmine had the same initial.
Freida: Yes, I know. But look to this photo. This is Ellen's sister.
Jasmine: Why Ellen? Why you killed her? (Almost cry).
Ellen: Because she makes my sister die. She date with my sister's boyfriend and she was shocked and she getting sick for several months and then she die.
Jasmine: Because that? You're so mean!
Irene: I think we should talk about this just in the police station. Miss Ellen?
Ellen: (go with Irene)
The End
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